James Marshall Goff Poet Cinquain

Remains (Jared Pickett You'Re Tagged!)

Remains
Pulse Taken
Living    or dead?
Fate reveals my destiny
Alive!



Thanks Ruben Ortellao! Jared Picket your next!
Modern Cinquain Based On Word Count....1,2,3,4,1

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Ashe Kristy De La Keur Scoville September 24, 2009 at 12:13 PM Interesting and so very unique.....The Southern Belle

Carolyn Devonshire September 12, 2009 at 7:30 PM Way cool, Jim. Felt like you were working for CSI. I like the approach you took here and you picked a great poet to tag. Let's see what Jared does. Love you, Carolyn

Raul Moreno September 12, 2009 at 12:43 PM Nice cinquain James, great ending...Raul

Sara Kendrick September 11, 2009 at 3:36 PM Nicely done. He's alive. Sara

Charmaine Chircop September 11, 2009 at 2:52 PM excelent cinquain---Charma:)