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Relying Upon God

In troubled times, we turn towards prayer
as optimal means, to restore balance.
Thus we recognise God, as our saviour,
even if a desperate dalliance,
surrendering our rigid ego stance.
Contemplating on these lines, we conclude
lower mind impulses, merely delude.
Our detached presence, is free and unbound,
devoid of fears and desires, thus unglued,
as rapturous bliss, within heart resounds.

21-April-2021
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Buhagiar Avatar
April 22, 2021 at 2:31 AM
The way to Heaven is prayer.
Seeker Avatar
April 22, 2021 at 4:25 AM
prayer as a seeking for objects desiring or as a yearning for connecting ... makes a good topic for a contest: what is prayer?
Michael Avatar
April 21, 2021 at 9:39 AM
Prayer is a blessing...Nice one my friend.
Seeker Avatar
April 21, 2021 at 8:17 PM
Thank you, Arturo! Looking forward to reading your poems too! We wait with bated breath for you to bite this bait!
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