Reluctantly

A strange thing happens as I age,
Which cannot be controlled.
I tend to focus, everywhere,
On people who are old.

Today, a doctor’s waiting room,
A check-up for my eyes,
Was filled with those so elderly,
From seats they couldn’t rise.

As names were called, they shuffled out,
(Our wait time very wrong!)
But watching them, I wondered,
Is this group where I belong?

To get there, on the bus I sat
As people moved inside,
With canes and walkers, hoping
For a seat unoccupied.

And on TV, up on the stage,
On Oscar night, I saw
The older actors missing
All their sparkle, once a draw.

When I was young, I rarely noticed
Seniors within range,
Yet now, reluctantly, I see
My view’s begun to change.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Wolf Avatar
March 19, 2026 at 8:27 PM
Poignant and painful, Ilene.
Callus Avatar
March 19, 2026 at 9:40 AM
You're not the only one to focus on older age groups, Ilene! Like that we stay looking (and hopefully feeling) younger. But who am I kidding lol :) :) those a decade younger are looking at us likewise! ~ Best regards // paul
Borke Avatar
March 19, 2026 at 4:41 AM
Wrinkled skin over sagging muscles is a facade. The oldest people were born a short time ago because a decade flies. A centenarian is only ten times that. I work on myself to visualizing them younger.
M  Avatar
March 18, 2026 at 8:06 PM
Ilene l just love this poem…..how very true how we start to view and interpret life, people and what we see differently as we age…..beautiful rhyming and such a relatable topic! Debx
Dietrich Avatar
March 17, 2026 at 1:29 AM
Yep. This one is sure unfortunately relatable.
Vesalius Avatar
March 16, 2026 at 5:52 PM
Well this is quite good! I love the rhyme and the plot. It provides insight and I like that. Nicely done!
Blanca Avatar
March 16, 2026 at 2:38 PM
Wow llene, your rhyme hit home ewith me I too look at those who deal with advance age. Very nicely done.
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