Relief a Call

Relief – A call

Supper has passed – not eaten – because of a call
my Daughter Melanie, made, that would end it all,
all that, the above rhyme, was created on.
It is now over – the pain – she made it, it’s all gone.

A happier man, now am I
I can now see a bluer sky !
Not lost, in a bluer I

B. J. “A” 2
June 3rd 2004
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Meade Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 9:10 PM
Been there with my daughters !! Cold has been my food when my appetite returned!!
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December 12, 2014 at 12:55 PM
Dear David : I am sorry to read of this unpleasant and sad situation having happened in your life. Might I assume that you were a single parent - as I - tying your best to raise ( for me, two girls, for almost ten years ) your daughters ? Anyway my poetic acquaintance, I hope that all that, has come to an end and you now have a good relationship with your daughters – as I do, although for one ( Mandy ) there was nine empty years . Have a great Christmas and New Years Season !!! B. J. “A ” 2 ( Bill . )
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