Relief

I had relief when I had belief,
Now it is a open ground,
Hoping to get lost if cannot found.

Relief was a pause
When I was deaf to abuse and applause

Now I have pace
Because I have now unchasable to chase.

Relief is a statement or a word
It's surely aloof and not in herd

I was the one who wanted it
But in course my mind and heart had to split.

Relief is a halo on the back of every pain
It's the nature's way to tell nothing is in vain

Let us kill the past 
And don't allow on future the shadow to cast
It is the only way to achieve it 
When the weather is really gloomy and overcast
Copyright © | Year Posted 2005

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August 28, 2024 at 1:19 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 21, 2016 at 1:00 PM
Amit, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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