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Relief

I had relief when I had belief, Now it is a open ground, Hoping to get lost if cannot found. Relief was a pause When I was deaf to abuse and applause Now I have pace Because I have now unchasable to chase. Relief is a statement or a word It's surely aloof and not in herd I was the one who wanted it But in course my mind and heart had to split. Relief is a halo on the back of every pain It's the nature's way to tell nothing is in vain Let us kill the past And don't allow on future the shadow to cast It is the only way to achieve it When the weather is really gloomy and overcast

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Date: 8/28/2024 1:19:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/21/2016 1:00:00 PM
Amit, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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