Relics of the Blue

They boarded the mighty ship on a fateful trip
 And waved to those ashore who craved a last goodbye,
 The ship set sail without fail as champagne they did sip
 The vessel's might was their delight, what could go awry?

 They had it all, the sea was theirs they had no fears
 They ate caviar from the bar and dined in grand style
 Clinked their glasses with the lasses as they shouted 'cheers'
 But soon they'd find that fate's unkind, and full of guile

 They didn't think the ship could sink
 With pomp and pride they took the ride
 But mightier than it was the iceberg they hit
 'Twas then they knew that out of the blue they'd be captives of the tide

 With lifeboats few they got a clue
 That Davy Jones would keep their bones,
 In the sea, they would forever be, relics of the blue
 And people wailed for the ship that failed, how mighty were its groans

 10-26-2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Proxenos Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 7:46 AM
The Titanic's fate was sealed - a mighty ship brought to rest at its best. You describe it as it was Joseph, splendor, joy and opulence which all the passengers wold have traded in order to live. Kudos my friend and congratulations on another splendid win. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Nicole Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 8:53 PM
"In the sea, they would forever be, relics of the blue" Oh my !! I have chills just thinking about it. Such a tragedy indeed. My heart drops every time I think of Titanic. This is so beautifully written and presented. Tender and heartfelt as well. ~ Brandy
Y. Avatar
November 1, 2020 at 6:21 PM
Hi Joseph, You penned this well. Congratulations on a well deserved win. Have a wonderful night:-) Alexis
Kendrick Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 6:02 AM
That had to be one horrible ordeal for all who were there and their loved ones who waited on either shore. Congrats on this winner. Sara
Dietrich Avatar
October 29, 2020 at 5:22 PM
I really enjoyed this one on the Titanic, joseph. How lucky were those that survived!!
Canerdy Avatar
October 29, 2020 at 7:49 AM
Excellent, descriptive narrative poem, Joseph. The Davy Jones line really stands out! Janice
Andresen Avatar
October 28, 2020 at 4:09 AM
- The most deadly civilian maritime disaster, Joseph ... a story we all know, great written - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Daniel Avatar
October 27, 2020 at 6:22 AM
Titanic tragedy well described, Joseph, tragic event though...
Rodrigues Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 7:40 PM
Titanic lives in infamy.
Pandit Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 3:04 PM
Unbelievable how this tragedy happened. Your poem evokes those human feelings--nature had its own plans.
Cunningham Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 11:54 AM
Enjoyed your verse Joseph, such a tragic story, all the sealed bulkheads were punctured below the water line, they had no chance. Tom
One Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 11:46 AM
Very sad event.. Well written
Buhagiar Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 11:14 AM
Bad design for the Titanic. I think it could not maneuver properly. So many dead. Loved your poem. ~~
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