Relentless Routine

Hovering feathers
Apprehensive behavior
Triumphant feeding
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mehta Avatar
April 29, 2010 at 8:05 PM
Congrats on the win
Dietrich Avatar
April 28, 2010 at 9:45 PM
good one, Cecil. Congratulations!
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April 27, 2010 at 8:45 PM
Congratulations on your success with this delightful haiku Cecil. well done...Margaret
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April 27, 2010 at 1:55 PM
Nice use of personification in your poem. The title works well with the piece. Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you many more. Karen
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April 27, 2010 at 6:54 AM
Congrats Cecil on your winning poem in the contest with your splendid words to depict the hummingbird photo.. elegant and excellent my friend..luv.. "Sweetheart"
Brown Avatar
April 27, 2010 at 5:58 AM
Congratulations on your win in Raul Moreno's contest "Daily Ritual" Cecil. Love, Carol
Moreno Avatar
April 27, 2010 at 3:04 AM
Cecil, congratulations on your success in my Daily Ritual contest...Raul
Sweetheart Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 4:06 PM
Wonderful words to describe the lovely photo Cecil and good luck in the new contest from Raul... with this amazing poem its certain to be in the winners circle..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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