Relentless Rhythmical Rose

She grew up a fragile flower
A fragrant fleeting tease
Waiting for the hour
For her love flowing in the breeze
Yes her love flowing in the breeze

Her petals red as wine
Her touch a feverous freeze
On moonlights, we would dine
For her love blowing in the breeze
Yes her love blowing in the breeze

Her beauty would devour
As she swayed with the trees
My foliaceous female flower
For her love showing in the breeze
Yes her love showing in the breeze

She would always strike a pose
And leave you with a wheeze
My relentless rhythmical rose
Her love gone with the breeze
Yes her love gone with the breeze.

Imagine if it were sung by Bob Dylan lol

Aug.06.2016
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Allison Avatar
August 6, 2016 at 5:26 PM
what unique take on the contest theme ^WW^ - the picture was not quite what I was expecting, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Warrior Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 12:04 PM
Thank you Jan...I'm always thinking differently Jan...and that's not such a bad pic...I'm trying to convey a point...a very sharp point though LOL...god bless...^WW^
Onclaud Avatar
August 6, 2016 at 5:16 PM
well done.. you really did a dark, beautiful work, WW.. huggs
Warrior Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 11:54 AM
Thank you nette my friend...you bring light into the dark lol...god bless...^WW^
Rycroft Avatar
August 6, 2016 at 3:55 PM
This is a brilliant poem well done with it xxx
Warrior Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 11:47 AM
Thank you Wendy...very nice to have you visit...god bless...^WW^
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