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Relentless Rhythmical Rose

She grew up a fragile flower A fragrant fleeting tease Waiting for the hour For her love flowing in the breeze Yes her love flowing in the breeze Her petals red as wine Her touch a feverous freeze On moonlights, we would dine For her love blowing in the breeze Yes her love blowing in the breeze Her beauty would devour As she swayed with the trees My foliaceous female flower For her love showing in the breeze Yes her love showing in the breeze She would always strike a pose And leave you with a wheeze My relentless rhythmical rose Her love gone with the breeze Yes her love gone with the breeze. Imagine if it were sung by Bob Dylan lol Aug.06.2016 Each one of us has His or Her own Flower of Attraction - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Rick Parise

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Jan Allison

Date: 8/6/2016 5:26:00 PM

what unique take on the contest theme ^WW^ - the picture was not quite what I was expecting, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Winged Warrior
Date: 8/7/2016 12:04:00 PM

Thank you Jan...I'm always thinking differently Jan...and that's not such a bad pic...I'm trying to convey a point...a very sharp point though LOL...god bless...^WW^

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/6/2016 5:16:00 PM

well done.. you really did a dark, beautiful work, WW.. huggs

Winged Warrior
Date: 8/7/2016 11:54:00 AM

Thank you nette my friend...you bring light into the dark lol...god bless...^WW^

Wendy Rycroft

Date: 8/6/2016 3:55:00 PM

This is a brilliant poem well done with it xxx

Winged Warrior
Date: 8/7/2016 11:47:00 AM

Thank you Wendy...very nice to have you visit...god bless...^WW^