Kim Rodrigues Poet Quintain (English)

Relentless Rain

SUMMER RAIN

Relentless rain ~ just what I asked God for.
I prayed release for thunder trove and all.
It’s poured for many days ~ please don’t be sore.
Cursed drought! Potential hope of siren’s squall.
Lush vibrant leaves! Luxurious quaint fall.

7/12/2017
English Quintain
Iambic Pentameter

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Dean Wood July 13, 2017 at 12:55 PM This is very nice Kim. This form is beating me up a little. Yours has a great feel to the rhythm. Regards, Dean Kim Rodrigues July 13, 2017 at 1:44 PM Thanks, Dean!

Chris Green July 13, 2017 at 6:52 AM Nicely written Kim. I believe most of us down here are praying for rain. Kim Rodrigues July 13, 2017 at 7:34 AM I hope you get some! Most of us are overjoyed to have a rainy summer here in Georgia!