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Relentless Rain

SUMMER RAIN Relentless rain ~ just what I asked God for. I prayed release for thunder trove and all. It’s poured for many days ~ please don’t be sore. Cursed drought! Potential hope of siren’s squall. Lush vibrant leaves! Luxurious quaint fall. 7/12/2017 English Quintain Iambic Pentameter

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Date: 7/13/2017 12:55:00 PM
This is very nice Kim. This form is beating me up a little. Yours has a great feel to the rhythm. Regards, Dean
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/13/2017 1:44:00 PM
Thanks, Dean!
Date: 7/13/2017 6:52:00 AM
Nicely written Kim. I believe most of us down here are praying for rain.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/13/2017 7:34:00 AM
I hope you get some! Most of us are overjoyed to have a rainy summer here in Georgia!

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