Released

I languish on a sea of untamed thoughts
I am powerless to reign 
The tempest within
Some say there are no new stories
But this way I have not been,
So my story keens
As an infant borne
In the bowels of a ship
Seeking stormy release, fearing the deep
Knowing not what is known
As  the word winds sweep
Safe to the shore , where I land in a heap
Alone but with relief. Released.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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April 5, 2015 at 3:56 PM
VALERIE, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. Have yourself a Happy Easter ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
Letkeman Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 3:57 AM
Thank you! I have been away so did not view my win till now. Deep bow!
A  Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 12:06 AM
Valerie, Nice Rock me around the clock win. ~Skat~
Letkeman Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 4:00 AM
I am blessed that you liked it! :)
Roper Avatar
February 14, 2015 at 11:02 AM
Congratulations on your win. Blessings and Happy Valentine’s Day Eve
Letkeman Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 4:00 AM
Blessings to you too :)
Austin Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 10:26 AM
My impression - you feel things deeply. This you bring out so well. daver
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January 11, 2015 at 3:23 AM
An intriguing poem...I rather like it! :-) john.
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