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I languish on a sea of untamed thoughts
I am powerless to reign 
The tempest within
Some say there are no new stories
But this way I have not been,
So my story keens
As an infant borne
In the bowels of a ship
Seeking stormy release, fearing the deep
Knowing not what is known
As  the word winds sweep
Safe to the shore , where I land in a heap
Alone but with relief. Released.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/5/2015 3:56:00 PM
VALERIE, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. Have yourself a Happy Easter ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
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Date: 2/22/2015 3:57:00 AM
Thank you! I have been away so did not view my win till now. Deep bow!
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Date: 2/16/2015 12:06:00 AM
Valerie, Nice Rock me around the clock win. ~Skat~
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Valerie Letkeman
Date: 2/22/2015 4:00:00 AM
I am blessed that you liked it! :)
Date: 2/14/2015 11:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Blessings and Happy Valentine’s Day Eve
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Valerie Letkeman
Date: 2/22/2015 4:00:00 AM
Blessings to you too :)
Date: 2/3/2015 10:26:00 AM
My impression - you feel things deeply. This you bring out so well. daver
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Date: 1/11/2015 3:23:00 AM
An intriguing poem...I rather like it! :-) john.
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