Release Through Tears

Crying dying leaf,
Expels it's life's flow through tears.
In the mourning calm.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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K. Avatar
June 3, 2010 at 10:26 PM
hey there Jimmy :) hope you're doing good as well :) --this is a very emotional haiku...thanks for your comments!
Mckenzie Avatar
April 24, 2010 at 6:09 PM
Jimmy~ A wonderful Haiku! I hope your doing well? I am enjoying your poetry my friend keep writing I love it! Your friend Laura :)
Mehta Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 9:44 PM
A fine images conveying apt meanings
Haick Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 7:34 PM
Excellent imagery here, JAM! Sad but when I think further...all is not lost..beautiful view of the pic...Much love, PB
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