Release

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Cross-referencing
We are yet In mind
We had pledged
To leave behind

Release, release
Mind-body apparatus
For it is but dust
Why for then the fuss

Bliss in permanence
Heightened rapture
We're ensconced in joy
Mind cannot capture

26-October-2022

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Sand Blown

Date: 10/26/2022 11:17:00 AM

...nice write....yes, mind be limited as a tool....imperfect, wrt the transcendental numbers that define the being of any reality.....such that an on/off 'peace' button might be a challenge to locate wrt realities irrationalities.....stan

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/26/2022 6:36:00 PM

thinking, imagining vs becoming, knowing

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/26/2022 12:54:00 AM

It will be in the afterlife that we begin to understand what real bliss is.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/26/2022 6:10:00 AM

Not later, Victor, here and now.