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Release

Cross-referencing
We are yet In mind
We had pledged
To leave behind

Release, release
Mind-body apparatus
For it is but dust
Why for then the fuss

Bliss in permanence
Heightened rapture
We're ensconced in joy
Mind cannot capture

26-October-2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Blown Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 11:17 AM
...nice write....yes, mind be limited as a tool....imperfect, wrt the transcendental numbers that define the being of any reality.....such that an on/off 'peace' button might be a challenge to locate wrt realities irrationalities.....stan
Seeker Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 6:36 PM
thinking, imagining vs becoming, knowing
Buhagiar Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 12:54 AM
It will be in the afterlife that we begin to understand what real bliss is.
Seeker Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 6:10 AM
Not later, Victor, here and now.
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