Relaxation

The geese have flown south
Lonely pond will freeze over
Sleeping for awhile
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Schiavina Avatar
November 28, 2023 at 1:00 PM
Congratulations Audrew on beautiful concise poem featured on Poetry Soup Home Page.
Byrne Avatar
January 4, 2010 at 11:05 PM
very good........smile!
Meade Stephenson Avatar
January 2, 2010 at 7:43 AM
A very picturesque scene you have here Audrey...wonderful haiku...thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my writes. Many thanks too for your always kind comments..all is much appreciated. Have a blessed day~Mary
Guzzi Avatar
December 27, 2009 at 5:09 PM
pleasant very pleasant! Light & Love
Guzzi Avatar
December 26, 2009 at 1:05 PM
fragile and sad..lovely. Light & Love
Pickett Avatar
December 22, 2009 at 4:22 AM
Oh those pesky Geese...Always on the move..Nice visual piece here Audrey...Enjoyed....Taz
Owens Avatar
December 17, 2009 at 7:42 PM
Nice Haiku Audrey...Enjoyed...Marty
Shango Avatar
December 17, 2009 at 9:20 AM
And while the geese are gone the poet remains cradled in the landscapes lullaby ... filtering its beauty to my heart again. Wonderful
Austin Avatar
December 17, 2009 at 8:30 AM
Great image, with sound and color and movement. Love, daver
Zakerski Avatar
December 17, 2009 at 2:17 AM
Your words paint a picture - Awesome job! I did not receive your SoupMail - it didn't go through. You are an superb writer - keep up the great work. Love, Kelly
Strand Avatar
December 16, 2009 at 11:51 PM
A popula winter pastime Audret.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Sheart Avatar
December 16, 2009 at 6:31 PM
Hi Audrey, Love this beautiful Haiku, the visual is great. Keep writing and I shall keep reading! Happy Holidays...Thanks for sharing. Love Light Patty
Nettles Avatar
December 16, 2009 at 4:23 PM
Need more passion with your three lines, fella.
Brown Avatar
December 16, 2009 at 3:45 PM
Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry with us today Audrey. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
December 16, 2009 at 10:01 AM
Love this Haiku. Keep the creative and magical pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
Sweetheart Avatar
December 16, 2009 at 7:07 AM
Yes Audrey .. this proves Winter is really here with your beautiful Haiku... I am hoping Summer is just around the corner ... great words and visual... thankxxx for sharing today... blessings... luv.... Linda-Marie...
Lopez Avatar
December 15, 2009 at 6:17 PM
resting ponds ....... a great thought with this write!!!!! this also means the fishing willhve t take a break aswell ;-(
Devonshire Avatar
December 15, 2009 at 5:51 PM
Lovely image of a winter scene, Audrey. I'm hoping to see some frozen ponds when I travel North for the holidays. Merry Christmas and thank you for sharing your talent with us this year. God bless you, Carolyn
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