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Relaxation

The geese have flown south
Lonely pond will freeze over
Sleeping for awhile

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Frances Schiavina

Date: 11/28/2023 1:00:00 PM

Congratulations Audrew on beautiful concise poem featured on Poetry Soup Home Page.

David Byrne

Date: 1/4/2010 11:05:00 PM

very good........smile!

Mary Meade Stephenson

Date: 1/2/2010 7:43:00 AM

A very picturesque scene you have here Audrey...wonderful haiku...thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my writes. Many thanks too for your always kind comments..all is much appreciated. Have a blessed day~Mary

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/27/2009 5:09:00 PM

pleasant very pleasant! Light & Love

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/26/2009 1:05:00 PM

fragile and sad..lovely. Light & Love

Richard Pickett

Date: 12/22/2009 4:22:00 AM

Oh those pesky Geese...Always on the move..Nice visual piece here Audrey...Enjoyed....Taz

Marty Owens

Date: 12/17/2009 7:42:00 PM

Nice Haiku Audrey...Enjoyed...Marty

L'Nass Shango

Date: 12/17/2009 9:20:00 AM

And while the geese are gone the poet remains cradled in the landscapes lullaby ... filtering its beauty to my heart again. Wonderful

Daver Austin

Date: 12/17/2009 8:30:00 AM

Great image, with sound and color and movement. Love, daver

Kelly Zakerski

Date: 12/17/2009 2:17:00 AM

Your words paint a picture - Awesome job! I did not receive your SoupMail - it didn't go through. You are an superb writer - keep up the great work. Love, Kelly

Brian Strand

Date: 12/16/2009 11:51:00 PM

A popula winter pastime Audret.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

P Sheart

Date: 12/16/2009 6:31:00 PM

Hi Audrey, Love this beautiful Haiku, the visual is great. Keep writing and I shall keep reading! Happy Holidays...Thanks for sharing. Love Light Patty

Silas Nettles

Date: 12/16/2009 4:23:00 PM

Need more passion with your three lines, fella.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/16/2009 3:45:00 PM

Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry with us today Audrey. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/16/2009 10:01:00 AM

Love this Haiku. Keep the creative and magical pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/16/2009 7:07:00 AM

Yes Audrey .. this proves Winter is really here with your beautiful Haiku... I am hoping Summer is just around the corner ... great words and visual... thankxxx for sharing today... blessings... luv.... Linda-Marie...

Abe Lopez

Date: 12/15/2009 6:17:00 PM

resting ponds ....... a great thought with this write!!!!! this also means the fishing willhve t take a break aswell ;-(

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/15/2009 5:51:00 PM

Lovely image of a winter scene, Audrey. I'm hoping to see some frozen ponds when I travel North for the holidays. Merry Christmas and thank you for sharing your talent with us this year. God bless you, Carolyn

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