Relatively
it took
an ant
two hours
to take
a seed
from point A
to point B
it took
me two
hours to
watch
him
do it
Post Comments
Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.
Please
Login
to post a comment
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a
Premium Membership.
