From my simple male mind, in the past I have viewed some relationships clinically before even introducing myself to them. These are some of those very analytic thoughts.
WHAT have her eyes seen and WHERE have her fingers been? WHOSE skin has she touched and HOW did she feel? WHEN does she remember this and WHY does she dress like that? DOES she think of me and WILL she feel passion tonight? ARE her secrets fun and HAS she experienced real happy? IS she good, IS she O.K., IS she adorable, IS she unique?
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