'rekindle'

a little smoke left warmth, a distant memory hope's fire still burning
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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March 2, 2012 at 10:06 PM
WILMA..READING UP ON SOME OLD CONTEST* CONGRATULATIONS~ WITH YOUR AWESOME WIN! ;-)*always..pd
Quigley Avatar
January 6, 2012 at 1:50 PM
Very nice Wilma. Congratulations
Arno Avatar
January 6, 2012 at 9:36 AM
Congratulations Wilma on your outstanding write. Have a great day. Jon
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January 6, 2012 at 8:55 AM
Congrats on your win in the contest with placement. Loved it. Thanks, bl
Brown Avatar
January 6, 2012 at 7:05 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "Any 2011 Poem" contest Wilma. Love, Carol
Green Avatar
January 3, 2012 at 9:31 PM
so cute,,,and brilliant,,well done....
K. Avatar
December 22, 2011 at 11:52 AM
hmm I will see what I can do with the 36 candles...hmm can I just use 3 candles?? and I am not disillusioned... missy, what I would give right now to have no eye bags like my baby pi right here... can you believe I still have to make dessert? haha so what am I still doing here? ok going going gone.... !!
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December 22, 2011 at 11:43 AM
umm, under the eyes?? I swear, I feel them sagging Right Now....as in my cheeks are getting h-e-a-v-i-e-r, those bags are pulling it down! and yup rekindle, recandle! :) I have some firework candles here... I can light them up for you on your special day, Missy :D
K. Avatar
December 22, 2011 at 11:18 AM
let that hope burn, Missy :) Really like the positive spin you put here, Missy :) speaking of...somebody's going to see candles burning brightly soon ^_^! and thank you very much for what you said in my write :)-- ok I better go now, shucks, so much cramming for me to do, I swear my eye bags get worse by the day....mwahugs!
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December 21, 2011 at 9:50 AM
Hi Wilma, such a precious verse to remind me that hope can keep the fire burning. You always put such feeling in your verses. Hope you have a wonderful Christmas my friend. :)
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December 20, 2011 at 8:12 AM
lovely words. harry
Dietrich Avatar
December 19, 2011 at 4:18 PM
Excellent senryu, Wilma. Very nicely done.
Brown Avatar
December 19, 2011 at 12:28 PM
Thank you so very much for your kind words on my poetry Wilma. Love, Carol
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December 19, 2011 at 6:51 AM
"a little smoke left" that's cute, Wilma . Your unique poem kindled my interest. Well done, my friend. My recomendation for lunch today is stay away from the chocolate! I had about two dozen chocolate cookies for dinner yesterday... hhhmmmm gained about 5 pounds I bet. Had to loosen my belt a notch. Stay away from the chocolate! It's devious! :x :) Merry Christmas love.
Wilson Avatar
December 18, 2011 at 6:44 PM
sometimes hope is all we have..alot said here in three lines Wilma...love,Deb
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December 18, 2011 at 5:42 PM
They say, 'Where there's smoke, there's a fire', Wilma...and there's nothing wrong with that! I'm adding this to my list of Favs. Love, Annalise
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