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'rekindle'

a little smoke left warmth, a distant memory hope's fire still burning
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/2/2012 10:06:00 PM
WILMA..READING UP ON SOME OLD CONTEST* CONGRATULATIONS~ WITH YOUR AWESOME WIN! ;-)*always..pd
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Date: 1/6/2012 1:50:00 PM
Very nice Wilma. Congratulations
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Date: 1/6/2012 9:36:00 AM
Congratulations Wilma on your outstanding write. Have a great day. Jon
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Date: 1/6/2012 8:55:00 AM
Congrats on your win in the contest with placement. Loved it. Thanks, bl
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Date: 1/6/2012 7:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "Any 2011 Poem" contest Wilma. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/3/2012 9:31:00 PM
so cute,,,and brilliant,,well done....
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Date: 12/22/2011 11:52:00 AM
hmm I will see what I can do with the 36 candles...hmm can I just use 3 candles?? and I am not disillusioned... missy, what I would give right now to have no eye bags like my baby pi right here... can you believe I still have to make dessert? haha so what am I still doing here? ok going going gone.... !!
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Date: 12/22/2011 11:43:00 AM
umm, under the eyes?? I swear, I feel them sagging Right Now....as in my cheeks are getting h-e-a-v-i-e-r, those bags are pulling it down! and yup rekindle, recandle! :) I have some firework candles here... I can light them up for you on your special day, Missy :D
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Date: 12/22/2011 11:18:00 AM
let that hope burn, Missy :) Really like the positive spin you put here, Missy :) speaking of...somebody's going to see candles burning brightly soon ^_^! and thank you very much for what you said in my write :)-- ok I better go now, shucks, so much cramming for me to do, I swear my eye bags get worse by the day....mwahugs!
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Date: 12/21/2011 9:50:00 AM
Hi Wilma, such a precious verse to remind me that hope can keep the fire burning. You always put such feeling in your verses. Hope you have a wonderful Christmas my friend. :)
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Date: 12/20/2011 8:12:00 AM
lovely words. harry
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Date: 12/19/2011 4:18:00 PM
Excellent senryu, Wilma. Very nicely done.
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Date: 12/19/2011 12:28:00 PM
Thank you so very much for your kind words on my poetry Wilma. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/19/2011 6:51:00 AM
"a little smoke left" that's cute, Wilma . Your unique poem kindled my interest. Well done, my friend. My recomendation for lunch today is stay away from the chocolate! I had about two dozen chocolate cookies for dinner yesterday... hhhmmmm gained about 5 pounds I bet. Had to loosen my belt a notch. Stay away from the chocolate! It's devious! :x :) Merry Christmas love.
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Date: 12/18/2011 7:26:00 PM
this warmed my heart. i have a poem to go along with this one. called "old flame". perhapes this was his experince. christmas is just around the corner. make yourself available. john
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Date: 12/18/2011 6:44:00 PM
sometimes hope is all we have..alot said here in three lines Wilma...love,Deb
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Date: 12/18/2011 5:42:00 PM
They say, 'Where there's smoke, there's a fire', Wilma...and there's nothing wrong with that! I'm adding this to my list of Favs. Love, Annalise
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