Rejection Song

Those publishers sent their reply
an email rejection slip
I took my time to read each line
while I bit my bottom lip.

They said the imagery was strong
with elements of cliché
the punctuation was all wrong
repeatedly.

They’re “sorry” they won’t print
my words of freedom
now all I seem to have
rejection songs
rejection songs

I tried to free my mind, over a thousand pages
but now they've made up their minds
after I'd used my energy
now I’m “unsuccessful this time”

But their bottom line is profit
with markets and trends where they look
my poetry’s not the right fit
in their current season of books

Won't they ever print
these words of freedom?
when all the words I see
rejection songs
rejection songs
rejection songs

I tried to free my mind, over a thousand pages,
but they had made up their minds
and I’d used up all my energy
on submissions time after time

Their world is driven by profit
why don’t you take a look?
seems poetry doesn’t quite fit
in their latest season of books

We still have words to sing
poetry is freedom
even when we receive
those rejection songs

Even when we receive,
those rejection songs
poetry is freedom
words of freedom

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 9/1/2024 11:30:00 AM
This is marvelous. No need to apologize to Bob Marley or anyone else, Martin. Once I (quickly) realized that it was a spoof of Redemption Song, I started singing the tune - out loud! - with your lyrics! Very well done!
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Martin Challender
Date: 9/2/2024 11:53:00 PM
So glad you enjoyed it Jim. Thanks for the positive feedback :)
Date: 8/28/2024 5:48:00 PM
A marvelous poem but I hope you are aware that it is a robot who sends that rejection letter. The joke is on us. Ignore it and keep writing. Oh. Bob Marley. I didn't see that.
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Martin Challender
Date: 8/29/2024 12:24:00 AM
Thanks Hilda, it is a bit tongue in cheek. My poetry was rejected by a poetry group rather than a publishers. The moral of the story as you say is to keep writing.
Date: 8/27/2024 12:55:00 AM
Inspired by and with apologies to, one of the greatest poets of all time, Bob Marley.
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