Rejection

Don't know how I missed this gem my poet friend...Excellent.....Happy Thanksgiving to you brother also....Michael

Quite creative thoughts about getting older. Our elderly should be revered, but they get little respect from today's youth, my friend. As the years pass, I find myself "dancing in the wind" hoping I will not be struck by "ungrateful breezes. You rock! Love, Carolyn

Quite meaningful write on the stages of life, L"nass. Thanks for stopping by poems and your comments,

You have magic in your pen. The ability to create such a vivd fall scene in so few lines. Excellent piece.

Another gem, you have a magical way of bringing your message across.. Hope your weekend will be a good one ~ Wilma

great write! So profound

oooh, very deep, L'nass. I feel that you are using the image from that poem I love so much (can't recall its name or author right now, but it was used in the novel "The Outsiders") I feel this too, that BROWN is all that is coming. Nothing gold can stay? Is that the line? YOu said in one of your comments you wanted to "grow up and write funny" like me. Hmmm, I think you were being sarcastic, right? You can't be young and write like this!

Sadly beautiful are these words of casting off the treasures of age...I have had a similar poem posted recently...it must be fact of growing older that puts these words into our pens. However, no one can express with the same quality as you, my friend.