Vijay Pandit Poet Verse

Rejecting Her Plea To Renegotiate What Was

Evoking sullen quests of a lonesome mind
She stepped outside under the starry skies
Only to find, one more time, no one replied

It was a vibrant sky celebrating moonlight
Wanting no part of her gloomy trespass
Jolting her entrance in thunderous clouds

Being self absorbed within grim thoughts
She rewrote the vows engraved in hearts
Ignoring sensuous past that longingly recalls

Refusing feelings that once she cherished
Courting indignation of a senseless voice
Asserting obliquely, she made her choice

Unwilling to acknowledge her cries  forlorn
Silence she heard was the galactic response
Rejecting her plea to renegotiate what was

May 10, 2019
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Angela Crabtree November 24, 2020 at 7:41 PM I feel the emotion in this poem, Vijay. Some things just can't be changed. Well written :)

Paul Callus May 26, 2019 at 11:43 AM Some decisions are not renegotiable, Vijay. It's like jumping from the top of a cliff...there is no going back! Your poem is a heart wrencher. ~ Regards // paul

Richard Lamoureux May 16, 2019 at 9:28 AM We often forget what was and don’t appreciate what is. I enjoyed this thoughtful write.

Besma Riabi Dziri May 15, 2019 at 8:01 AM You have genuinely and wholeheartedly depicted the inner struggle of mind and heart over what the Self can go through on the path of life and love.. when breeze merge with storm, only in poetry we seek balm! Definitely another favourite poem of your inspiring gems.. Best regards.. Stay blessed always.

Heidi Sands May 14, 2019 at 3:34 PM I can feel this one as I read it. Very well done. You have reached me with this one :)

William Kelii Kekaula May 13, 2019 at 12:44 PM Regrets festers within a sullen lost soul, a gem of share here Vijay, I like how you write your poetic works, truly! Aloha wk

Jennifer Proxenos May 12, 2019 at 12:47 PM Difficult to re-negotiate the past - rejection plays an integral part in such a situation - this poem is so perfectly penned Vijay, wonderful write. Hugs, Jennifer

Panagiota Romios May 11, 2019 at 6:50 PM Deep Drama! Line I liked best was... It was a vibrant sky celebrating moonlight! Thank you Panagiota

Andrea Dietrich May 11, 2019 at 1:26 PM oh that is a horrible feeling and I think more commonplace than most realize. Loved "galactic response" What a cool line. You rocked this poem.

Joseph May May 10, 2019 at 7:48 PM The law of hearts remain...Very nicely penned Vijay...

Kim Rodrigues May 10, 2019 at 7:37 PM It seems that nature opposes her, with all its beauty and light.

Brandy Nicole May 10, 2019 at 4:09 PM Rejection, an emotion the heart has a hard time dealing with. Sometimes, to the point of not allowing anyone to get close. Ever again. Very sad indeed. Your thoughts tug deeply at my heart. ~ Brandy

Tom Cunningham May 10, 2019 at 1:16 PM A well written deep verse Vijay. Tom.

Nette Onclaud May 10, 2019 at 12:05 PM intriguingly fascinating, vijay... when she wants what she wants, there's no stopping her... greeat job... huggs

Supraja Kannan May 10, 2019 at 11:43 AM Such a beautiful emotional write, Vijay. Deep and powerful.

Lawrence Sharp May 10, 2019 at 9:48 AM Inspired stuff, my friend, very poetic indeed.

Arturo Michael May 10, 2019 at 9:43 AM Ah...I thought so myself, viewing the previous comment...DEEP...A complicated set of emotions...You understand her well...

Demetrios Trifiatis May 10, 2019 at 7:54 AM Deep in essence, astonishing in elegance dear friend, Vijay!