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Rejecting Her Plea To Renegotiate What Was

Evoking sullen quests of a lonesome mind She stepped outside under the starry skies Only to find, one more time, no one replied It was a vibrant sky celebrating moonlight Wanting no part of her gloomy trespass Jolting her entrance in thunderous clouds Being self absorbed within grim thoughts She rewrote the vows engraved in hearts Ignoring sensuous past that longingly recalls Refusing feelings that once she cherished Courting indignation of a senseless voice Asserting obliquely, she made her choice Unwilling to acknowledge her cries forlorn Silence she heard was the galactic response Rejecting her plea to renegotiate what was May 10, 2019 HM: Strand select M contest by Brian Strand

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Angela Crabtree

Date: 11/24/2020 7:41:00 PM

I feel the emotion in this poem, Vijay. Some things just can't be changed. Well written :)

Paul Callus

Date: 5/26/2019 11:43:00 AM

Some decisions are not renegotiable, Vijay. It's like jumping from the top of a cliff...there is no going back! Your poem is a heart wrencher. ~ Regards // paul

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/16/2019 9:28:00 AM

We often forget what was and don’t appreciate what is. I enjoyed this thoughtful write.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 5/15/2019 8:01:00 AM

You have genuinely and wholeheartedly depicted the inner struggle of mind and heart over what the Self can go through on the path of life and love.. when breeze merge with storm, only in poetry we seek balm! Definitely another favourite poem of your inspiring gems.. Best regards.. Stay blessed always.

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/14/2019 3:34:00 PM

I can feel this one as I read it. Very well done. You have reached me with this one :)

Hilo Poet

Date: 5/13/2019 12:44:00 PM

Regrets festers within a sullen lost soul, a gem of share here Vijay, I like how you write your poetic works, truly! Aloha wk

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/12/2019 12:47:00 PM

Difficult to re-negotiate the past - rejection plays an integral part in such a situation - this poem is so perfectly penned Vijay, wonderful write. Hugs, Jennifer

Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/11/2019 6:50:00 PM

Deep Drama! Line I liked best was... It was a vibrant sky celebrating moonlight! Thank you Panagiota

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/11/2019 1:26:00 PM

oh that is a horrible feeling and I think more commonplace than most realize. Loved "galactic response" What a cool line. You rocked this poem.

Joseph May

Date: 5/10/2019 7:48:00 PM

The law of hearts remain...Very nicely penned Vijay...

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/10/2019 7:37:00 PM

It seems that nature opposes her, with all its beauty and light.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 5/10/2019 4:09:00 PM

Rejection, an emotion the heart has a hard time dealing with. Sometimes, to the point of not allowing anyone to get close. Ever again. Very sad indeed. Your thoughts tug deeply at my heart. ~ Brandy