Regrets

So much pain everyday
You try to cope,
By using dope.
Loss of family,
Loss of friends,
So many losses in the end.
Time goes by,
You slowly die.
Addiction took your life away,
Because you used dope everyday.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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April 17, 2011 at 3:51 PM
I would like to know more details about this person. What were they like? What were they escaping from? Your poem is so general that it really doesn't give me a feeling of loss or regret, but I think it has a lot of potential to do so.
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