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caress of a raindrop caught in the hand held to the sun exquisite fracture light and the taste reminds me of the slide of your smile down my throat

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/31/2010 9:48:00 AM
Fantasic, with unconventional metaphors (slide of your smile...) which creates an enticing uniqueness to this poem. I dig it.
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Date: 3/24/2010 5:07:00 PM
oh wow Shelli - I love this! I made me say OOOOOH! I love reading your writing!
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Date: 3/24/2010 7:54:00 AM
thank you!
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Date: 3/24/2010 7:32:00 AM
Exquisite write Shelli - Capturing so much in so few words - Pleasure to read - Fab share -:)
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