Refute, Return

a grieving heart hears the pain how many times must it echo again direction askew from days tossed aside no longer can tragic history abide time for re-joice to be embraced sounding the depths of dignity traced empty shell cracked fault lines abundant peeling a past rampant redundant interdicting near-future most nobly thence reach inexhaustible sanctity
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Nicole Avatar
February 28, 2025 at 6:14 PM
Many are able to embrace moments of joy, after the grieving is over. Some are unable to. Your thoughts caress gently around me and my heart. Hugs, Brandy
Parker Avatar
February 28, 2025 at 9:06 PM
To live one must go forward. Time heals, but time ends...
Goldsmith Avatar
February 28, 2025 at 11:32 AM
I enjoyed reading your powerful write. Love your first line. Yes, it does... Have a blessed day writing away...............
Parker Avatar
February 28, 2025 at 2:04 PM
Many blessings, Paula. Appreciate your visit. :~]
Ashley Avatar
February 22, 2025 at 10:06 AM
Dear Arlo, your poem explores ongoing grief with deep rich imagery. There comes a time for joy to be embraced again and to end the cycle of pain. Beautiful expression wrapped in emotive verse and rhymes. Warmest wishes my poet friend.. ~Susan
Parker Avatar
February 22, 2025 at 11:17 AM
Your kind comments so appreciated, SA. :o))
Puddifoot Avatar
February 20, 2025 at 6:23 AM
am i the only one commenting?? this is deep, and it contains one of your fave words 'heart', so here's one for ya <3
Parker Avatar
February 20, 2025 at 12:26 PM
I'm an undiscovered genius, Pearl. Thank God for YOU!!!
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