Teresa Harr-Pena Poet Rhyme

Refused

I walked with scents and beauty

Redwoods, lilies, pines, morning glory's

Camped in darkness amist shinging stars

Just for future stories



Water gushing with force

Shooting with grace off beaten rocks

Crisp air for a last breath

A door to which I knock



Please let me enter

I feel my deeds are done

Refuse me not for I'm tired

Of the rising sun



The doors stayed closed

I'm ignored yet once again

Unknown if for kindness

Maybe I need one more sin

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Michael Jordan July 27, 2008 at 5:02 AM Teresa - this poem is well written and very beautiful yet so sad - In the past I often felt the same way - My life was nothing but pain and heartache (Sad part was it was all my bad) when I handed it all over to God - I then paroled from prison for the last time and by Gods grace I got my family back, no longer do I cook or use drugs and my life is blessed - I hope that you find peace with-in - blessings

Sharon Winter July 27, 2008 at 2:21 AM Beautiful imagery in the beginning. You seem so troubled. I am wishing you love and hope and the beginning of new and wonderful things. Love, Shar

Derrick Burton July 26, 2008 at 10:02 PM remember god loves you,talk to him sometime,then write