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Refrigerated

Refrigerated white clad knight A thousand horses pull With their might, prancing 'pon the road Cargo hull loaded full Up and down the expressway roam See vehicles and roads Rarely getting to visit wife And place of home's abode Same billboards everyday stored in Memory~packed away Loners tucked in but need escape Complex puzzle at play Inspired by a tractor/trailer truck on the expressway.....

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/17/2013 7:05:00 AM

Good morning Sara, i like how you were inspired on the expressway. amazing jobs some have on a daily life.. I posted a new poem, (DADDY) if you would like to read it, when you have the time... always looking forward hearing from you... always~ Linda

Just That Archaic Poet

Date: 8/26/2013 11:46:00 AM

I like your inspiration for this piece; it's neat the little or insignificant things that inspire us poets. And I love your use of " 'pon"; I saw it in several of your pieces and, as my name implies, I am a lover and sucker of archaic phrases, words or wording. Nice job with this piece :)

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 8/19/2013 7:09:00 AM

You've captured this image well Sara.I love it my friend.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 8/19/2013 2:54:00 AM

Excellent. Lovely poem. Enjoyed. Tfs

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 8/19/2013 2:49:00 AM

Hi Sara, I must say you managed to capture my interest right from the title. It's clever how you've used the word refrigerated then gone on to talk about sameness -it's just like a freezing time, things remain the same. Very well penned!

Donna Jones

Date: 8/18/2013 5:20:00 PM

Yes what it must be like to travel the same routes all the time, to overnight us our stuff..and bring our food....a big thanks to the truckers!!!!!!wonderful poem Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/18/2013 8:48:00 AM

beautiful observation of a scene with detailed and expressive lines... what a gorgeous write, sara.:) huggs

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/18/2013 7:18:00 AM

This is an outstanding and lovely write my friend! I love your subject matter, it is unique and intriguing Sara! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this morning! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!