Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

Refrigerated

Refrigerated white clad knight
A thousand horses pull
With their might, prancing 'pon the road
Cargo hull loaded full

Up and down the expressway roam
See vehicles and roads
Rarely getting to visit wife
And place of home's abode

Same billboards everyday stored in
Memory~packed away
Loners tucked in but need escape
Complex puzzle at play  

Inspired by a tractor/trailer truck
on the expressway.....

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Poet Destroyer A September 17, 2013 at 7:05 AM Good morning Sara, i like how you were inspired on the expressway. amazing jobs some have on a daily life.. I posted a new poem, (DADDY) if you would like to read it, when you have the time... always looking forward hearing from you... always~ Linda

Just That Archaic Poet August 26, 2013 at 11:46 AM I like your inspiration for this piece; it's neat the little or insignificant things that inspire us poets. And I love your use of " 'pon"; I saw it in several of your pieces and, as my name implies, I am a lover and sucker of archaic phrases, words or wording. Nice job with this piece :)

Mustapha Mohammed August 19, 2013 at 7:09 AM You've captured this image well Sara.I love it my friend.

Ravi Sathasivam August 19, 2013 at 2:54 AM Excellent. Lovely poem. Enjoyed. Tfs

Vicky Tsiluma August 19, 2013 at 2:49 AM Hi Sara, I must say you managed to capture my interest right from the title. It's clever how you've used the word refrigerated then gone on to talk about sameness -it's just like a freezing time, things remain the same. Very well penned!

Donna Jones August 18, 2013 at 5:20 PM Yes what it must be like to travel the same routes all the time, to overnight us our stuff..and bring our food....a big thanks to the truckers!!!!!!wonderful poem Sara

Nette Onclaud August 18, 2013 at 8:48 AM beautiful observation of a scene with detailed and expressive lines... what a gorgeous write, sara.:) huggs

Russell Sivey August 18, 2013 at 7:18 AM This is an outstanding and lovely write my friend! I love your subject matter, it is unique and intriguing Sara! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this morning! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!