Refreshment

A tear in a cloud
Deluge of raindrops descend 
The thirsty earth drinks.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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July 2, 2010 at 5:15 PM
Now, this is just so real. I even love the imagery of the rain floating and sinking into the thirsty ground. Great job! Joseph
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July 2, 2010 at 11:10 AM
ahh,, refreshing he he,, nice write on natue?, lol enjoyed your haiku..P.D.
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