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Refreshment

A tear in a cloud Deluge of raindrops descend The thirsty earth drinks.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/2/2010 5:15:00 PM
Now, this is just so real. I even love the imagery of the rain floating and sinking into the thirsty ground. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 7/2/2010 11:10:00 AM
ahh,, refreshing he he,, nice write on natue?, lol enjoyed your haiku..P.D.
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