Refreshing Advice

Curl up with a book's deep reflections
   Turn off that electronic device
Stay away from artificial refreshments
   And follow refreshing advice

Take a dip in a clearwater lake
   a nap in the middle of the day
Go for a walk when you feel stale
   Learn to meditate, let your mind sail

What have you got to lose?
   You don't want to turn to booze
If you light up a marijuana joint
   You'll surely have missed the point

You arrived here all new and all fresh
   ~ Now live life relaxed and refreshed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Kiser Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 10:05 AM
I must take this advice more often; I've fav'd it so I can have the reminder. A super piece.
Wolf Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 11:09 AM
Wow. I'm honored by your fave. Thank you so much, M.L! Season's Best, Gershon
Krutsinger Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 9:28 AM
"light up a joint, miss the point" - this is so true! Relax and meditate!
Wolf Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 11:08 AM
Darn it! All out of cigarette wrapping paper today. LOL. Guess 'll just have to pace n my doghouse all day... Thanks, Caren. :) gw
Romios Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 7:40 AM
I agree with Tom.
Wolf Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 11:07 AM
Drop down one reply for my phone number. Thanks!!! :) gw
Cunningham Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 5:09 AM
Great advice indeed Gershon. Bring back the good old ( no electronics etc) days, people actually spoke to Each other back then. Tom.
Wolf Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 11:06 AM
Let's exchange phone numbers right now, Tom. Mine is 1-800-big-fool... Smiles, Gershon
Chiri Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 2:02 AM
Haha! Great advice my friend! You are so full of words of wisdom lol! And loved the last lines!;)
Chiri Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 11:04 PM
;)
Wolf Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 11:05 AM
Just call me Gershon 'Wisenheimer!' As for what I'm full of, please contact my wife. LOL. ` Smart-alec
Gauthier Avatar
November 30, 2019 at 10:48 PM
Great advice, Gershon.
Wolf Avatar
November 30, 2019 at 11:18 PM
Thanks for the support here, Line! Always greatly appreciated. Season's best, Gershon
Na Avatar
November 30, 2019 at 9:56 PM
I like this 1 Gershon. People to relax the old fashioned way. Thanks for sharing this
Wolf Avatar
November 30, 2019 at 10:13 PM
Yep. We just set back in our rocking chairs and doze off.. LOL. Thanks, Gregory! Smiles, Gershon
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