Refrains of Winter Sonata

REFRAINS OF WINTER SONATA When fallen brown leaves brush a sepia picturesque and the bubbly breeze blows a heated winter sonata, the giant roses of clouds are teased, they shed icy petals tumbling, drifting like little ballerinas dropping to rest on branches of trees, grasses, houses and down to window ledges clustering in lily-white hues. Frosty mornings and nights lure the need for warmth from brewed coffee, a kiss or just a minute of touch... Absorbing the air, alone, I wander to the cover-walks, I see children tramping and playing on hills of frost, some couples carelessly sliding, they laugh out loud, yet afar, some robins, deer and beggars frown in despair as they are homeless. No fire nor a person to cuddle with. No adequate food to eat nor a flowing water to drink too... Cold. Wet. All white, frozen snow-tears are in their eyes and so I am one afternoon, a year and six months ago. The winter atmosphere can stir love passions within but how can it all be when the only woman, I love. I wanted to marry and ready to give my all: refused me? She, slowly walking away, leaving me crying-- a snow. ________________________________________________________ ~~SPONSOR: Broken Wings CONTEST: Write ME A Winter Poem~~ __Olive Eloisa Guillermo__ 8:16 pm, November 14, 2015
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Merryman Avatar
November 25, 2015 at 3:46 PM
Olive, the imagery in this is beautiful! Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim
Kimathi Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 3:43 AM
Congrats on your #1 placement Olive! ;-)
Dietrich Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 8:07 PM
super duper well deserved win, Sweetie. Congratulations.
Puddifoot Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 4:04 PM
beautiful imagistic poem, i like the idea of clouds as giant roses - congrats on your top win!
Nance Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 8:03 AM
Congrats on a top win with your wonderful write ! So very well done Olive!
A. Sharma Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 12:13 AM
Wonderful poem dear Olive n so is ur first place win! Big congrats!
Tor Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 11:11 PM
Olive a wonderful win!! Congratulations.
Roper Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 9:13 PM
Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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November 19, 2015 at 8:12 PM
Olive, Congrats on your Winter Poem win. HUGS **SKAT**
Dutta Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 6:38 PM
Congratulation Olive . Wonderful poem deserves to be placed at top. Congrats again. Anisha D
Callus Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 3:24 PM
Always lovely to come back with congratulations Olive_eloi:) Well done....a deserved top win!! A treat...something to eat, while you sit on this high seat!! Hugs // paul
Allison Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 12:36 PM
Such a pretty poem Olive many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Austin Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 11:33 AM
"A kiss or just a minute of touch," Beautiful within this sad framework. Love, daver
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 2:36 AM
Thanks much Daver, I am delighted by your comment.. =`)
Callus Avatar
November 15, 2015 at 1:53 PM
The imagery is awesome, Olive_eloi! Your winter sonata is a delight to the senses; the last two stanzas lovely yet sad. (I wonder if you get winters like this in your country!) Hugs // paul
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
November 17, 2015 at 1:34 AM
Paulet, we don't get winter like this in the Philippines.=`) thank you so much... =`) I want to present winter side as beautiful and sad for some..~Olive Eloisa =`)
Dietrich Avatar
November 14, 2015 at 7:48 PM
Olive, this is REALLY GREAT poetry. I love the pattern you used, the imagery and the meaning behind it all. Awesomely done.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
November 16, 2015 at 3:50 AM
Thanks much Andie.. =`) I so appreciate your awesome comment. =`) I hope the readers will understand why i use the title, refrains, when there is no repeating lines in the poem... which I refer to the usual things happening during winter and memories flashing to the man and also to the ones affected badly...
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