Ghairo Daniels Poet Other

reflective slivers

stillness turns wheel feel, peel      
past present future surreal zeal    
pure expressions cure inner furore   
softly breath stitches rare rhymes     

creating cosmic garlands with lyrics  
emotions eclectic ebbs and flows     
awaken daring dreams deific glows  
fire earth water stanzas know           

 etheric words mirror reflective slivers   

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Allpoetry SILVER WINNER Poem: 
5 words in 9 lines : August 26

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Paige Hind August 29, 2026 at 12:53 PM lovely

Alison A Smith August 27, 2026 at 3:40 AM Congratulations on your Silver win, Ghairo! This is a mesmerizing poem that beautifully captures the meditative nature of writing and self-reflection. Your use of internal rhyme and sonic play in the opening lines creates a wonderful, hypnotic rhythm, while phrases like "softly breath stitches rare rhymes" offer striking, ethereal imagery. The cosmic and elemental themes blend perfectly to arrive at that gorgeous closing line. Ghairo Daniels August 27, 2026 at 11:08 PM ThkU, A.S. - Appreciate your depth read. Xx❤️