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Reflective

reflective pool calm, still, dark, enchanting... Eve's youth eddied
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Kiser Avatar
February 25, 2015 at 3:08 PM
Beautifully penned.
Maverick Avatar
February 23, 2015 at 1:03 PM
Very intriguing Sara, well told..'
Chakrabarty Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 9:58 AM
"...Eve's youth eddied " a kingdom for this line...A golden Senryu. Favved. Hugs!>>>Your friendRajat
Sathasivam Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 7:43 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Beautiful serene. Enjoyed. Tfs
Sirak Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 6:47 AM
Serenity and peace in her reflections. Fantastic!
Onclaud Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 12:24 AM
vivid impressions from you, sara... what a solid ending.. huggs
Petersen Potter Avatar
February 21, 2015 at 6:45 PM
Excellent pen Sandra! I enjoyed your very serene senryu. A big 7 from me!I wish you a very lovely weekend! In his light! God bless you! :) D"
Hunjeri Avatar
February 21, 2015 at 4:25 PM
The picture speaks volume! So reflective. Nice one Sara. #7
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