Reflective

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reflective pool calm, still, dark, enchanting... Eve's youth eddied

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/25/2015 3:08:00 PM

Beautifully penned.

Joe Maverick

Date: 2/23/2015 1:03:00 PM

Very intriguing Sara, well told..'

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 2/22/2015 9:58:00 AM

"...Eve's youth eddied " a kingdom for this line...A golden Senryu. Favved. Hugs!>>>Your friendRajat

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 2/22/2015 7:43:00 AM

Excellent. Well penned. Beautiful serene. Enjoyed. Tfs

Monterey Sirak

Date: 2/22/2015 6:47:00 AM

Serenity and peace in her reflections. Fantastic!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/22/2015 12:24:00 AM

vivid impressions from you, sara... what a solid ending.. huggs

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 2/21/2015 6:45:00 PM

Excellent pen Sandra! I enjoyed your very serene senryu. A big 7 from me!I wish you a very lovely weekend! In his light! God bless you! :) D"

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 2/21/2015 4:25:00 PM

The picture speaks volume! So reflective. Nice one Sara. #7