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Reflections On Whale Watching

reflections on whale watching

humpback whales breaching 
 play on blue flowing sea swells ~
  smooth fluke prints remain
 2-17-22

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Kim Rodrigues

February 25, 2022 at 10:29 AM

Perhaps you’ve been whale watching. Lovely imagery.

Sam Kauffman

February 25, 2022 at 12:34 PM

We have. Our son and his family came out on the three day weekend from Chicago to get some sunshine and fresh air! Among other adventures, we went whale watching. Amazing and awe inspiring experience. Thank you viewing the whales with me. Blessings!

Joseph May

February 24, 2022 at 6:38 AM

Very nicely penned Sam...soupmail

Sam Kauffman

February 24, 2022 at 9:58 AM

Many thanks Joseph! Our whale watching adventure was so memorable. soup mail.

Andrea Dietrich

February 22, 2022 at 4:40 PM

Very nicely described , Sam. Thanks so much for your recent comments on my poetry.

Sam Kauffman

February 24, 2022 at 9:56 AM

Thank you Andrea! It was an amazing day. Have been enjoying your poems :)

Gary Radice

February 21, 2022 at 3:34 AM

I thought it was about time to call in and read another Ms Kauffman poem so here I am. When I first joined The Soup I wasn't won over too much by this form of poetry but examples such as yours here Sam have made me rethink and reflect on my initial thoughts. Your lovely haiku has left me with a sense of calm in much the same way as the whale left that patch of calm water behind on the surface of the ocean. Cheers - Gary

Sam Kauffman

February 22, 2022 at 9:22 AM

Hi Gary! Thank you so much for your delightful words of compliment and your visit! We had an amazing day on the ocean. The waters were like glass. I am so glad that came through for you in seventeen syllables. Like you when I joined the soup haiku really didn't have a huge appeal for me although I did enjoy reading it. Having worked with the form I have realized how much punch these limited syllables have in creating striking images and reaching deep into the spirit. Sending you blessings of calm! Cheers!

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