Reflections of Love

Salty liquid lips,
Await the approaching sun:
While evening skies blush.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Vangaveti Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 9:55 AM
Wow what a great reflection of love :) Nature sets an example for everything in life. Love is not an exemption. Loved it :)
Jones Avatar
March 6, 2013 at 8:37 PM
Sounds like a lovely opportunity for a quiet sail.
Moreno Avatar
March 6, 2013 at 10:59 PM
Indeed, a day of relaxation in the sun.
Chircop Avatar
March 5, 2013 at 11:47 PM
I love this Raul..The nature s reflection of love..Just lovely image . like a paintimg ..Charma
Moreno Avatar
March 6, 2013 at 12:41 AM
Thanks, I wrote it for the contest but I didn't make it in time.
A   Avatar
March 5, 2013 at 9:50 PM
Hello Raul, a very good reflection *haiku*, love the way it bounces off the sun, and into the world of delight. a good loving haiku. Nice to see you here at the soup. hope you are well? Good night~ LINDA :-) (ps~~~ like the new avatar)
Moreno Avatar
March 6, 2013 at 12:42 AM
Thanks, I didn't think anyone would notice it.
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