Naomi Jenkins Poet I do not know?

Reflections From My Window (Miami To Los Angelles 2001)

Passing through towns
Backdrops in blue
Lonely times 
Engulf my thoughts
Welcoming back you.
Suns pierce so clear
through these brilliant days
Breeze like boys
Run dancing,
Through girls
Like trees that sway
I often wonder 
What you're thinking
Do you share such times as these?
Do you stop 
But for a moment
only to think about me?

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Johnny H. June 12, 2009 at 7:41 PM i went through some of you're poems. this is one of my favorites that i've read. especially lines 8-11.

Debbie Guzzi May 27, 2009 at 10:11 AM Momentary Pause..title sugestion....try to use a differnant word for "Sun" or "sunny" ...bright would ..bring you to the "b's" on the next line nicely! Light & Love