Reflections

good and evil vaguely viewed through morning fog… bathroom mirror steamed Gods and Devils contest 19 Jan 2015

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Cona Adams

Date: 2/20/2015 8:14:00 AM

A great Senryu, correctly labeled. Another seven for me.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/19/2015 9:13:00 PM

I like the way you had it foggy inside and out!!! Nicely done, my friend.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 1/22/2015 1:24:00 AM

Who we see in the mirror each day depends on how we truly feel on the inside... A very creative write, David and a unique one for the contest theme. Well done! Good luck to you!

David Mohn
Date: 1/22/2015 9:36:00 AM

Thank you so much Kelly...your comments are very appreciated