Reflections

good and evil 
vaguely viewed through morning fog…
        bathroom mirror steamed


         Gods and Devils contest
                19 Jan 2015

darklightsenryu

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Cona Adams

February 20, 2015 at 8:14 AM

A great Senryu, correctly labeled. Another seven for me.

Andrea Dietrich

February 19, 2015 at 9:13 PM

I like the way you had it foggy inside and out!!! Nicely done, my friend.

Kelly Deschler

January 22, 2015 at 1:24 AM

Who we see in the mirror each day depends on how we truly feel on the inside... A very creative write, David and a unique one for the contest theme. Well done! Good luck to you!

David Mohn

January 22, 2015 at 9:36 AM

Thank you so much Kelly...your comments are very appreciated

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