Reflections

Grey skies, it might just rain.
Almost as though it feels my pain.
Waves crashing against the rocks.
Feeling numb on life’s hard knocks. 

Walking towards the open sea.
In the water I see a reflection of me.
Teary red eyes, a girl so down.
What happened to the girl who was once so strong? 

Slowly falling to my knees.   
Useless n weak is what I feel.
I looked to find a happy face.
The one I portray in a daily race.

But what I found and what seemed to be.
Was only a true reflection of me.
One that people never see
and one that I hide entirely.

Is this who I always want to be?
My reflection is slowly killing me.
It’s not the life I want to lead.
But it’s up to me to change the reflection I see.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 5/7/2013 7:28:00 PM
Hi Sasha, :-) is this who I want to be?? I can see clearly through them words... Change is the key word... thank you for sharing... LINDA
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Sasha Maharaj
Date: 5/9/2013 12:36:00 AM
Thank You PD :)
Date: 5/7/2013 5:37:00 AM
"Though the skies are gray, may your day be bright - and may your tender heart be filled with glorious light. Let the joy which love supplies shine through your soul and eyes." ** Poem I wrote for my children, but gladly share with you. Go well, Sasha.
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Sasha Maharaj
Date: 5/7/2013 5:45:00 AM
Thank You so Much David... :) i will treasure those words always.
Date: 5/7/2013 5:10:00 AM
Cleverly written poem into the insight of what our minds can do to us as we have the two opposing 'reflection' of our character-- ours and the one we want the world to see. Nice write xx
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Sasha Maharaj
Date: 5/7/2013 5:46:00 AM
Thank You Kim :)
Date: 5/7/2013 4:53:00 AM
Sasha, one day may be rainy but after that the sun will shine again! Embrace that fact and think that you only need one person, this special person to make you happy! He is out there, when you are ready he will appear! Beautiful poem, very human and very true! SMILE!
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Sasha Maharaj
Date: 5/7/2013 5:46:00 AM
I await patiently for him :) Many Thank Demetrios...
Date: 5/7/2013 3:06:00 AM
- Sasha, this is a very well written poem - It is written with deep and sad feelings. - I'm sending you lots of good thoughts and hope you will smile again. - Take care of yourself. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Sasha Maharaj
Date: 5/7/2013 3:09:00 AM
Thank You Anne :) xoxoxo
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