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Reflections

What makes us act the way we do Is it something buried deep in our genes? Programmed to live our whole life through Never able to alter the scene? Are we all merely here to play a role That's been predetermined by fate? Can we redirect the path we're following If we're heading for a life second rate? Don't get me wrong, my life's been great There's nothing I'd really like to change Perhaps a little more stability would be nice Though I might find that a wee bit strange Everybody thinks it would be better “if” But “if” has certain strings attached Shouldn't go there, the results could be bad Don't mess with the path that's been mapped Just be happy with the skin that you're in Your life will take its own twists and turns If you just try to live an exemplary life Loads of happiness will be yours in return

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Date: 12/6/2022 12:09:00 PM
Wow—love this one! Thanks for sharing your wise words. “Don't mess with the path that's been mapped” —sound advice, I’d say…thank you for your words. Always, Laura
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/6/2022 12:39:00 PM
"wise words?" hmmm! Thank you dear sweet Laura... still can't believe this is all happening! Lovsies, Happy Jack xox
Date: 12/3/2022 11:03:00 AM
so true....'lifes acceptance' be like unto an 'accept-tent' that one may 'accept-tense' and not be drowned.....stan sand
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/3/2022 1:52:00 PM
"Just be happy with the skin that you're in" That says it all... no other choice! Cheers my good friend!
Date: 12/3/2022 8:24:00 AM
Jack, there is an enormous amount of wisdom packed into this poem. I thoroughly enjoyed it. A FAVE. This poem ought to be a Poem of the Day!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/3/2022 9:53:00 AM
Thank you for the FAVE... much appreciated my friend!
Date: 12/3/2022 8:08:00 AM
An admirable poem Jack, but what if we make a bad decision at the crossroads of life, is there no going back? Your poem has given me food for thought, thoroughly enjoyed.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/3/2022 9:29:00 AM
I guess I would hope I made the right decision and suffer the consequences! Your mind is clicking today sweet on! XOX Decision
Date: 12/3/2022 5:59:00 AM
I suppose you're right Jack, our role in life already mapped out for us. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/3/2022 6:19:00 AM
Is our life predetermined or do we have a say! Hmmm something to think about eh Thomas? Have a great weekend my friend!

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