Reflection of a Harrowing Time

Reflections of a Harrowing Time 

A deafening silence, waiting in isolation.
Within cold white walls, test after test,
no new revelation.
No food, no drink, surviving on drips of medication,
Reading medics' reactions, of puzzling looks: running out of options. 

The delicate soul weighs heavy,
With rumbling noises from the belly.
Clad in dreary hospital gowns,
The fading spirit answers with frowns.

Out from a dark shadow came:
Will I live or will I die?
Hope whispered, “Nothing changes 
when you cry.”
Praying, some say, brings miracles 
from the sky,
Now is the time to look up high and 
give praying a try. 

Each moment is precious, no more 
sighs and more of asking why.
Now isn’t your time to wave goodbye.



Zyrool 
8/26
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Bauer Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 9:56 AM
not sure if this is based on something really going on in your life, zyrool, but if so, i hope your prospects improve and you start feeling better. you've described this very well...
Gifford Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 1:19 PM
Hello Ilene, thank you so much for the visit and your thoughtful words, means a lot. It’s true, Slowly mending. Sending blessings your way my dear friend.🙏
Sands Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 5:19 AM
I love your poem. Well written :)
Gifford Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 9:16 AM
Thank you for the read, Heidi. Have a pleasant day.
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