David William Breidenthal Poet Haiku

Reflecting

I swim rivers to rivers
I think upon my challenging routine
I reflect upon my life

I splash puddle to puddle
I reflect upon my blurred future…so—
I set my mind on those days…

I trekked building to building
I caught myself thinking of cheery times
That’s when I had hope in mind

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Poet Tacito November 19, 2011 at 10:24 AM Ahh, the beauty of reflection. This is why it's so vital to never forget where you are today by remembering where you were. Awesome job, David! David William Breidenthal July 23, 2012 at 2:06 PM Yeah! :) Exactly thankx for the comment!

Poet Destroyer A November 13, 2011 at 10:55 PM very deep.. i think the cheerful thoughts are the best out of every thought possible... enjoyed,..p.d. David William Breidenthal November 16, 2011 at 11:31 PM True that!- thanks for commenting! :D