Refined Perfection

On a cold eerie night they come out to feed.
No desire to kill they just have to fulfill a need.
Most evil things plan on doing cataclysmic wrong,
Vampires are made through no choice, even if strong.
One reverse bite is all that is needed to start desire.
Their souls thrown out into the dreaded Hells’ fire,
Sleeping thru daylight they hunt and feed at night.
They are presumed evil since death follows fright.
With no soul they are doomed to this world of dark.
They carry on with life un-chosen with makers mark.
Witches have choices between being evil or good.
Maybe Vampires would choose differently if they could.
This monster that has been crucified thru ages defined.
If given a chance would deliver perfection refined.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Baity Avatar
September 3, 2011 at 1:28 AM
great write cecil...very creative....smiles....chiquita
Kendrick Avatar
September 1, 2011 at 7:45 PM
Scary...Sara
Ramage Avatar
August 31, 2011 at 10:46 PM
Neat poem, did you enter this one in the contest, if not, you should. Lee
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