Reeds

Wind, sly wind 
Brush over the shore 
Sweep the leaves 
Stones, water  
Whistle over the lilies
And rattle the reeds
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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September 1, 2012 at 10:36 AM
JEREMY, congratulations in Kim's contest. Nice "Shadorma Styling Poem" enjoyed stopping by today. :-) always PD
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August 30, 2012 at 6:34 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Kim's "Shadorma Style" contest Jeremy. Love, Carol
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August 29, 2012 at 2:23 PM
The expressiveness of this one took me there to enjoy the scene..((()))!!!Congrats on your winning work..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Sara
Martin Avatar
August 29, 2012 at 6:37 PM
Thank you so much, Sara
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August 27, 2012 at 8:17 PM
I enjoyed your picturesque write, Jeremy! Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Kim
Martin Avatar
August 27, 2012 at 9:32 PM
Thank you very much for ackowledging me with placement! I enjoyed writing that for your contest very much. Be well, Jeremy
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