Redress

from a winged elm tree
a wren's knife cuts through glum dawn ~
                            joyful day afoot



A New Hiku Footle Tanka Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Brian Strand
Date written: 11/15/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Dietrich Avatar
November 16, 2022 at 1:07 PM
This is a real beauty, Edward.
Ibeh Avatar
November 27, 2022 at 10:55 AM
Thank you so much, Andrea:-)
Roper Avatar
November 15, 2022 at 11:59 AM
Nice, Haiku. Good luck in the contest. Blessing my friend.
Ibeh Avatar
November 15, 2022 at 1:58 PM
Thank you so much, Eve:-)
Pandit Avatar
November 15, 2022 at 11:16 AM
Your poem invokes onset of a joyous day ahead. Lovely write.
Ibeh Avatar
November 15, 2022 at 1:57 PM
Thank you very much, Vijay:-)
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 15, 2022 at 11:02 AM
Hello Edward, this will be my fav. This is a beautiful poem. Blessings my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 16, 2022 at 1:32 PM
Hello Edward, you are welcome my friend. Blessings. Darlene
Ibeh Avatar
November 15, 2022 at 1:57 PM
Thank you very much for the lovely visit and the visit, Darlene;-)
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