Redress

from a winged elm tree a wren's knife cuts through glum dawn ~ joyful day afoot A New Hiku Footle Tanka Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand Date written: 11/15/2022

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/16/2022 1:07:00 PM

This is a real beauty, Edward.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 11/27/2022 10:55:00 AM

Thank you so much, Andrea:-)

Eve Roper

Date: 11/15/2022 11:59:00 AM

Nice, Haiku. Good luck in the contest. Blessing my friend.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 11/15/2022 1:58:00 PM

Thank you so much, Eve:-)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/15/2022 11:16:00 AM

Your poem invokes onset of a joyous day ahead. Lovely write.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 11/15/2022 1:57:00 PM

Thank you very much, Vijay:-)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/15/2022 11:02:00 AM

Hello Edward, this will be my fav. This is a beautiful poem. Blessings my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/16/2022 1:32:00 PM

Hello Edward, you are welcome my friend. Blessings. Darlene

Edward Ibeh
Date: 11/15/2022 1:57:00 PM

Thank you very much for the lovely visit and the visit, Darlene;-)