Redhead

I don't need roses on my bed;
I have roses in my head.
Every time I think of you, 
A thought rose blooms.
Red petals of love
Opening up...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Rozario Avatar
June 29, 2012 at 12:28 AM
Oh this is very sweet...are you a redhead by the way???
Makama Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 5:51 AM
This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.
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May 16, 2012 at 5:00 PM
I GUESS NATHAN, on the bottom of me, did not get the image of a blooming rose opening every time your honey is near... i wish Nathan, would pop tulips into my head every time he is near... well, i'm not even lucky with roses in bed. oh well! always~ The Poet Destroyer
D. Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 11:22 AM
i like the begining but the ending come soon and to abrutly perhaps you can more to it
Macfarlane Avatar
May 8, 2012 at 4:30 PM
Lovely write! May love always surround you.
Croft Avatar
April 25, 2012 at 5:33 PM
nice touch on redheads
Breidenthal Avatar
April 19, 2012 at 12:44 PM
Very beautiful visuals I got from this verse. Well done! Always, Laura
Andresen Avatar
April 17, 2012 at 7:27 AM
Original written poem, like that!!! Wich you all the best in contest! -Have a nice day. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Burch Avatar
April 17, 2012 at 1:49 AM
what a clever piece!! lol ... wonderful write!! big hugs, love deb :)
Dietrich Avatar
April 16, 2012 at 10:51 PM
Or is it just for a special someone and it's the rose that is the redhead?
Dietrich Avatar
April 16, 2012 at 10:51 PM
this is so NEAT. For a redhead girl. Awesome!!
Falgout Avatar
April 16, 2012 at 10:14 PM
I love your poem,,Love opens doors to many adventures,,every petal takes time just like the beauty of a rose
Song Avatar
April 16, 2012 at 9:22 PM
Susan, I want roses in my bed and in my head! ha ha...just kidding..I get the idea you are conveying here and it is grand! Gotta have a lil fun..best to u in the contest..Love, Gwendolen
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