John Lawless Poet Cinquain

Redemption - For Contest

Redemption

Fragments
of broken dreams
haunt the edge of sunrise,
awakening the beauty of
each piece.


2/23/2016


submitted to – Fragment of Life – Poetry contest
sponsor – Broken Wings

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Poet Destroyer A March 15, 2016 at 10:58 AM John, Congrats on your "Fragment Of Life" win. Luv ~LINDA~

Dr. Upma A. Sharma March 8, 2016 at 10:20 PM Delightful poetry John.. congrats on big win!

Susan Gentry March 8, 2016 at 6:33 AM Congratulations on your win! Interesting.

Andrea Dietrich March 7, 2016 at 3:34 PM wow, Deep and lovely!!

Beautiful Scars March 7, 2016 at 10:26 AM Wow John, this is an amazing cinquain. Well done! congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo *smiles*

Daniel Turner February 24, 2016 at 7:28 AM Very optimistic, John. Great write. John Lawless February 29, 2016 at 1:20 PM yeah, and I usually lean a bit toward the dark side. Thanks for stopping by to read and comment