Redemption

Shackles on their wrists,
Bowing down with clenched fists
A battle for the ages,
A war with seldom wages
A fight that need not be fought,
Yet pain and suffering is what was taught
We see hurt in a soldier’s eyes 
As we sing them their final lullabies
Goodbye forever, we knew you not by name
Though this fate of yours will soon be your fame
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Burton Avatar
January 30, 2010 at 4:07 PM
Enjoyed this compassionate poetry... a great tribute for the soldiers abroad. Enjoy your weekend. :)
Barnes Avatar
January 29, 2010 at 12:00 PM
Nice!
Brown Avatar
January 29, 2010 at 10:40 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Lauren. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
January 29, 2010 at 6:44 AM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned here. Keep the creative pen flowing. Welcome to soup. Hope that you have a very enjoyable stay. Sara
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