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Redemption

Shackles on their wrists, Bowing down with clenched fists A battle for the ages, A war with seldom wages A fight that need not be fought, Yet pain and suffering is what was taught We see hurt in a soldier’s eyes As we sing them their final lullabies Goodbye forever, we knew you not by name Though this fate of yours will soon be your fame

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/30/2010 4:07:00 PM
Enjoyed this compassionate poetry... a great tribute for the soldiers abroad. Enjoy your weekend. :)
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Date: 1/29/2010 12:00:00 PM
Nice!
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Date: 1/29/2010 10:40:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Lauren. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/29/2010 6:44:00 AM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned here. Keep the creative pen flowing. Welcome to soup. Hope that you have a very enjoyable stay. Sara
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