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Redemption

Crown of thorns, Died on the cross for our sins.

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Jared Pickett

Date: 12/2/2009 5:28:00 AM

Boy, you are a hit right off the get... I knew you would be....:JP]

Date: 12/1/2009 4:20:00 PM

Amen! The essence of faith in just three lines. Blessings to you for sharing this with us. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen

Raul Moreno

Date: 12/1/2009 11:39:00 AM

Lovely read Richard, the price has definitely been paid. Though, respectively, I think this is more a Senryu form. Blessings to you and your family...Raul

Mary Meade Stephenson

Date: 12/1/2009 7:35:00 AM

This is a very powerful haiku and so very true my love.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/1/2009 6:40:00 AM

Amen,you brought a tear to my eyes,He did die for our sin,my sin too,and that crown of thorms says it all..Amen,May we all remember..--Charma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/1/2009 6:25:00 AM

The reason HE came to be born is the context of your wonderful poem today.. so many expressions of faith on Soup this day.. it must be turning the calendar over to read December is here... luv .. blessings ... luv again... Linda-Marie "Sweetheart"

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 12/1/2009 6:04:00 AM

Thought provoking . First and last lines part of same. -Robert