Redemption

Crown of thorns,
Died on the cross
for our sins.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Pickett Avatar
December 2, 2009 at 5:28 AM
Boy, you are a hit right off the get... I knew you would be....:JP]
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December 1, 2009 at 4:20 PM
Amen! The essence of faith in just three lines. Blessings to you for sharing this with us. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
Moreno Avatar
December 1, 2009 at 11:39 AM
Lovely read Richard, the price has definitely been paid. Though, respectively, I think this is more a Senryu form. Blessings to you and your family...Raul
Meade Stephenson Avatar
December 1, 2009 at 7:35 AM
This is a very powerful haiku and so very true my love.
Chircop Avatar
December 1, 2009 at 6:40 AM
Amen,you brought a tear to my eyes,He did die for our sin,my sin too,and that crown of thorms says it all..Amen,May we all remember..--Charma
Sweetheart Avatar
December 1, 2009 at 6:25 AM
The reason HE came to be born is the context of your wonderful poem today.. so many expressions of faith on Soup this day.. it must be turning the calendar over to read December is here... luv .. blessings ... luv again... Linda-Marie "Sweetheart"
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December 1, 2009 at 6:04 AM
Thought provoking . First and last lines part of same. -Robert
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