Redemption

i never sold my soul ~ but it once look out the pawnbrokers window

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Craig Bowden

Date: 1/14/2022 2:52:00 AM

I’m still waiting to redeem mine. Excellent.

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/14/2022 3:32:00 AM

Thanks Craig, the pawnshop seemed a better option than the irredeemable one, cheers David

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 1/13/2022 1:43:00 PM

Glad you never sold your soul….you had time to reflect in the ‘window’…Great write and congratulations on your win. :)Paulette

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/13/2022 1:58:00 PM

Thank you Paulette, I love that time to reflect in the window comment, but at certain points in our lives it can be a split second decision, the pawnshop may be the only choice, cheers David

Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/13/2022 11:59:00 AM

That's great David! Congrats and high fives for your win. Wonderful image of "pawning" one's soul! Sending you joy for each day of the new year.

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/13/2022 12:28:00 PM

Right back at you Sam, hope I redeemed the right one from pawnshop lol, cheers David

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/5/2022 5:24:00 PM

Tough times... No doubt about that, David. Hang in there, gw

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/6/2022 8:09:00 AM

To put ones soul on the line, takes a desperate situation, but sometimes it may just be redeemable Gershon, cheers David

P.S. Awtry

Date: 1/2/2022 5:29:00 PM

Oh, that is packed with meaning! All the best in 2022!

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/3/2022 2:33:00 AM

Thank you P. S. It runs pretty deep indeed, good luck in 2022 cheers David

Jenna Logan

Date: 1/1/2022 10:14:00 AM

Good thing you only pawned it instead of selling it, so you were able to reclaim your soul.

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/1/2022 10:23:00 AM

I think it was my one I redeemed from the broker lol, I sure hope so, you fully get my intended message here, cheers David