Redemption

i never sold my soul ~ but it once looked out the pawnbrokers window
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Bowden Avatar
January 14, 2022 at 2:52 AM
I’m still waiting to redeem mine. Excellent.
Kavanagh  Avatar
January 14, 2022 at 3:32 AM
Thanks Craig, the pawnshop seemed a better option than the irredeemable one, cheers David
Calasibetta Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 1:43 PM
Glad you never sold your soul….you had time to reflect in the ‘window’…Great write and congratulations on your win. :)Paulette
Kavanagh  Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 1:58 PM
Thank you Paulette, I love that time to reflect in the window comment, but at certain points in our lives it can be a split second decision, the pawnshop may be the only choice, cheers David
Kauffman Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 11:59 AM
That's great David! Congrats and high fives for your win. Wonderful image of "pawning" one's soul! Sending you joy for each day of the new year.
Kavanagh  Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 12:28 PM
Right back at you Sam, hope I redeemed the right one from pawnshop lol, cheers David
Wolf Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 5:24 PM
Tough times... No doubt about that, David. Hang in there, gw
Kavanagh  Avatar
January 6, 2022 at 8:09 AM
To put ones soul on the line, takes a desperate situation, but sometimes it may just be redeemable Gershon, cheers David
Awtry Avatar
January 2, 2022 at 5:29 PM
Oh, that is packed with meaning! All the best in 2022!
Kavanagh  Avatar
January 3, 2022 at 2:33 AM
Thank you P. S. It runs pretty deep indeed, good luck in 2022 cheers David
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