Redbird and Cherries

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feasting in the trees redbird with traces of gold in crimson sunset the song is waiting for a moonlight appearance white rose drifting clouds scarlet cherry hues as mellow day is dying flamingos dancing jade frog is croaking into a burgundy night forest green tree bliss

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/10/2021 5:13:00 PM

'Flamingos dancing' in that third stanza has set me hopping around my room. ~ Peg Leg Wolf

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/10/2021 7:54:00 PM

That sounds delightfully fun! Let me know if you need someone to lean on. :=)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/9/2021 1:58:00 AM

The bliss of nature vibrates in this stupendous poem. ~~

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/9/2021 11:17:00 AM

I have enjoyed your wonderful comment. :=)

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/8/2021 4:21:00 PM

Hi Evelyn, Your chosen words always deliver beautiful images. I can just picture the whole scene. And that is due to your skillful pen. I loved the violin playing; it’s a wonderful world as well. Great job. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/8/2021 5:01:00 PM

Hi Alexis, I am so thankful to have such an appreciative reader as you. Thank you for once again bringing a smile into my day with your winning words. Have a nice evening, my friend, Evelyn :)