Red Sun Rises

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Red sun rising, a day just begun Partly cloudy that hints of showers A day with minuscule of golden sun But house finches feel seeds’ power Those red head flit, sing, and chirp, Perched on feeders, a vibrant display, Their melodies floating those sweet twirps, A symphony of sound on this day Spring dances upon the warm air A celebration of new beginnings My love blooms like flowers fair In my heart, a joyful feel winning Swallows’ feathers light as kisses Do an aerial dance in the breeze Land inches away, my nose just misses Avoids causing me that big sneeze In the garden, love's sweet embrace, Hand in hand, hearts beating as one, Together in this enchanted place, Underneath the warm, golden sun. How I long to go there once again To love's enchanted garden In sweet delight my soul ascend As life no longer has me caseharden

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Date: 5/3/2024 7:23:00 PM
Awesome write adored reading your work many blessings
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/4/2024 11:39:00 AM
Yolanda, Your review was uplifting. Sara K
Date: 5/3/2024 2:11:00 AM
Spring is here with all its glory and your imagery is perfect.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/3/2024 4:31:00 AM
Victor, thank you for the kind words. Sara K
Date: 4/30/2024 5:35:00 PM
delightful poetry, a song of love to the spring and nature beauty, enjoyed so much my reading thanks poet
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/1/2024 5:05:00 AM
Yann, your comment made me feel understood. Sara K
Date: 4/30/2024 3:28:00 PM
Beautiful sights and sounds of rising sun scintillating the dawn. You brought to fore nature's beauty--in sweet embrace--together in enchanting place.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/1/2024 5:03:00 AM
I am uplifted that you would find my work to be beautiful, Vijay. Your visits are always so encouraging. Sara K
Date: 4/30/2024 12:53:00 PM
Dear sara, always so good to read your poems, you weave them in such an eloquent manner. I absolutely love the rhymes and rhythm of this and the adorable picture to go with this soulfully moving write so poetically delivered. Pleasure reading your work always. Sending you light always
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/1/2024 5:01:00 AM
I appreciate the kind review of my work, IE. I am delighted it was a pleasure reading my work. Sara K
Date: 4/30/2024 10:49:00 AM
Fourth verse, delightful, made me smile. Out on my back deck listeningto birdsong, enjoying my small bit of forest, and the sun after the rain. Blessings, dear poet! Love the romance and wow, the punch at the end…caseharden…not likely to see that in any other poem!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/30/2024 12:41:00 PM
Caseharden probably not seen in a poem for sure. Life does that to us sometimes though. Thanks for dropping by and taking time to comment. Sara K
Date: 4/30/2024 9:45:00 AM
- A beautiful symphony, Sara :) - hugs
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/30/2024 12:40:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise. Hugs accepted. Sara K
Date: 4/30/2024 9:08:00 AM
Wonderful piece. Nice rhythm and flow. Enjoyed.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/30/2024 12:39:00 PM
Why, thank you, Frank. I am glad you enjoyed it. Sara K
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