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Red Sun

it now shows itself from behind tranquil white clouds . . . sun setting blood red July 12, 2019 for the haiku-hue Poetry Contest of Kim Rodrigues

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Date: 7/17/2019 5:10:00 PM
hello Andrea, oh the beautiful sunset. I enjoy them. Especially when it reflects on the water. have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 7/17/2019 4:02:00 PM
Gorgeous imagery in this haiku Andrea. Best for the contest. Xxoo
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Date: 7/16/2019 2:14:00 PM
Perfect! You are so good at the last line, nobody turns a turn better. This is another contest I missed. Love ... CayCay
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Date: 7/16/2019 5:37:00 PM
i may as well have missed it too. Got N/A but at least I am happy with it personally. Thanks, Caycay. (tried to call to tell you a really weird thing, maybe we can talk tomorrow)
Date: 7/15/2019 4:00:00 PM
Such intense transition. No faded hues, no pinks or blues. Just crisp stark white that dripped blood red. I'm sorry, but I have to note. The captcha validate letters were ybs. I'm sorry, I didn't mean for it to come off as bs. :)
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Date: 7/15/2019 10:03:00 AM
Nice job, wonderful poem... salute alkas
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Date: 7/15/2019 9:53:00 AM
You've created in your words one of my favourite images Andrea. Tom
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Date: 7/14/2019 10:08:00 PM
Wow Andrea great write!;)
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Date: 7/14/2019 11:50:00 AM
Very powerful image ...
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Date: 7/14/2019 5:02:00 AM
Sounds lovely, nice imagery...
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Date: 7/13/2019 12:33:00 PM
Vivid imagery, Andrea.
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Date: 7/13/2019 11:46:00 AM
Early in the morn or at sunset so nice view and image!
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Date: 7/13/2019 7:18:00 AM
Like fire...Clear imagery...
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Date: 7/13/2019 6:30:00 AM
Oh, I like this bleeding behind tranquility! Perfectly penned, Andrea. Good luck in conest)
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