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Red Sun

it now shows itself

from behind tranquil white clouds . . .

sun setting blood red


July 12, 2019
for the haiku-hue Poetry Contest
of Kim Rodrigues

sunhaiku

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Darlene De Beaulieu

July 17, 2019 at 5:10 PM

hello Andrea, oh the beautiful sunset. I enjoy them. Especially when it reflects on the water. have a nice evening my friend.

Connie Marcum Wong

July 17, 2019 at 4:02 PM

Gorgeous imagery in this haiku Andrea. Best for the contest. Xxoo

CayCay Godwin

July 16, 2019 at 2:14 PM

Perfect! You are so good at the last line, nobody turns a turn better. This is another contest I missed. Love ... CayCay

Andrea Dietrich

July 16, 2019 at 5:37 PM

i may as well have missed it too. Got N/A but at least I am happy with it personally. Thanks, Caycay. (tried to call to tell you a really weird thing, maybe we can talk tomorrow)

Robert Johnson

July 15, 2019 at 4:00 PM

Such intense transition. No faded hues, no pinks or blues. Just crisp stark white that dripped blood red. I'm sorry, but I have to note. The captcha validate letters were ybs. I'm sorry, I didn't mean for it to come off as bs. :)