Eve Roper Poet Rhyme

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Red Roses

Sitting in a bower, admiring
the heartwarming   beauties dance
Red rosebuds unfold, revealing
the romance of nature at a glance

Wisp of light prancing around them
yielding a velvet air to touch
Brighter than gems, yet on a stem
Dawn has burst forth, I love so much

Exquisite velvet roses
long green stems, leaflets, and prickles
Spray of velvet roses poses
Sweet fragrance of moist dew trickles

Crisp air weaving through trembling leaves
Deep yearning feeling to embrace
the sight of the red rose, like thieves
takes my breath away with grace


8/12/2016

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Connie Marcum Wong May 31, 2017 at 7:30 PM This poem is a sparkling ruby that favorably compares with the beauty of a scarlet rose! Congratulations on your fine win Eve. : ) 7

Sandra Haight May 30, 2017 at 4:39 PM Lovely tribute to our beautiful red rose, Eve. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra

Laura Leiser May 30, 2017 at 3:54 PM What a lovely, poetic gem about the fine, red rose, Eve! Congrats on your win :)

Janice Canerdy May 30, 2017 at 3:36 PM Eve, this poem is absolutely delightful! Congrats on your win! Janice

Afzal Nusker August 22, 2016 at 3:59 AM I simply love this poem. Beautifully written. Best wishes, Eve.

John Lawless August 17, 2016 at 9:14 AM congrats on your placement in the contest Eve, well done.

Joanna Daniel August 16, 2016 at 5:03 AM Congratulations on your wonderful win:) well deserved:)

Teddy Kimathi August 16, 2016 at 2:25 AM Congrats Eve, for your placement in the contest, with this rich imagery!! ;-)

Pashang Salehi August 15, 2016 at 4:26 PM very nice.... Congratulations

Beautiful Scars August 15, 2016 at 4:11 PM Lovely Eve, congrats on your placement with this remarkably beautiful poem, my favorite in the contest :)-luloo Eve Roper August 15, 2016 at 4:19 PM thank you so much, sweet friend :)

Sunita U.D Palawon August 14, 2016 at 11:40 AM Congrats on your high place win. Lovely poem about roses. :) Sunita Eve Roper August 15, 2016 at 4:19 PM Sunita, thank you so much :)

Anisha Dutta August 14, 2016 at 8:12 AM Congrats Eve to win on Red Roses. Hugs Eve Roper August 15, 2016 at 4:20 PM thank you so much, Anisha :)

Joseph May August 14, 2016 at 7:21 AM A lovely write Eve...Congrats on your win.. Eve Roper August 15, 2016 at 4:19 PM Thank you so much, Joseph :)

Alexis Y. August 13, 2016 at 9:36 PM Hi Eve, Congratulations on your winning write: -) Alexis Eve Roper August 15, 2016 at 4:18 PM thank you so much, Alexis :)

Connie Marcum Wong August 13, 2016 at 9:35 PM One of you loveliest poems Eve! Congratulations on your high placement! ; ) 7 Eve Roper August 15, 2016 at 4:18 PM Thank you so much, dear friend :)

Jan Allison August 13, 2016 at 8:39 PM Dropping back with my congrats Eve I really loved this one:-) hugs Jan xx Eve Roper August 15, 2016 at 4:17 PM thank you so much, dear friend :)

CayCay Godwin August 13, 2016 at 7:13 PM Beautiful, Eve - a lovely, lovely poem ... CayCay Eve Roper August 15, 2016 at 4:17 PM thank you so much, CayCay :)

Sandra Haight August 12, 2016 at 9:21 PM Such beautiful imagery of roses, Eve. painted with your poetic words. Best wishes for the contest. 7 Hugs, Sandra Eve Roper August 15, 2016 at 4:16 PM thank you so much, Sandra :)

Tim Smith August 12, 2016 at 9:08 AM Stunning as the rose. Eve Roper August 12, 2016 at 5:12 PM Thank you, Tim.

Probir Gupta August 12, 2016 at 6:01 AM Majestic ... will win ... enjoyed so much ... Eve Roper August 12, 2016 at 5:38 PM Thank you, Probir.

Jan Allison August 12, 2016 at 3:23 AM Oh so beautiful Eve - you have captured the moment perfectly:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Eve Roper August 12, 2016 at 5:38 PM Thank you, Jan.