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Red Oak

red oak tassels gone
yellow pollen lingers, coats ....
spring storms stir

springhaiku

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Andrea Dietrich

June 22, 2019 at 8:24 PM

I enjoyed your haiku here, Sara. Thanks so much for the win in your contest.

Robertina B.

May 22, 2019 at 7:21 AM

Such a splendid haiku, Sara.. Breathtaking imagery!! Enjoyed this, my friend.. Have a blessed day!!

Sara Kendrick

May 23, 2019 at 2:29 PM

Robertina, Thanks for the kind review of my work. I appreciate you dropping by. Sara

Jack Horne

May 12, 2019 at 1:03 PM

i can see this so clearly

Gershon Wolf

May 3, 2019 at 2:33 PM

What intensity of imagery and feeling woven into just three lines. Gorgeously done, Sara. :) gw

Kim Rodrigues

April 29, 2019 at 8:13 PM

A beauty! Here comes the storm!

M. L. Kiser

April 26, 2019 at 6:24 PM

Another "fav"; this was absolutely beautiful!

David Meade

April 26, 2019 at 9:06 AM

Mother Nature dazzles, coats, and washes clean -- nicely down Sara!!

Sara Kendrick

April 26, 2019 at 10:21 AM

David, Thanks for the visit to my page. I appreciate you reading and taking time to comment on my work. We had a little rain last night but not enough to really clean things up but thank God we were spared the bad storms that could have come through. Sara

Vijay Pandit

April 26, 2019 at 7:33 AM

So well said, Sara..the pollen is all over now..hope its reign will soon end.

Sara Kendrick

April 26, 2019 at 10:20 AM

Vijay, Thanks for the visit to my page. I appreciate you taking time to comment. We are about finished with the worst of the pollen here but of course it goes on all summer but not as bad as in the spring when all the trees, shrubs and grasses are blooming. Sara

Tom Cunningham

April 26, 2019 at 7:02 AM

Powerful image Sara, hope you're not in its line. Tom.

Sara Kendrick

April 26, 2019 at 10:19 AM

Tom, There were some tornadoes in this system but they were farther west than here but the same system came through last night here with that eerie feeling but we have been passed over this time. Thanks for dropping by. Sara